First Time Sharing-Hope

To the man that life left broken,
    lonely in your shattered cell,
I give to thee a love unspoken
    to save you from your tortured hell.

To that man with love unspoken,
    awaits a soul to guide your fate.
And through the soul with strong chains broken,
    lies the key to Heaven's Gate.

Man needs love to light his way,
    to pull him from his darkened cave.
And with that love, by star so bright,
    shines a path, through constant night.

-Christy M.

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